I have more writing to do tonight of course. I'm finding this one passage particularly difficult to fix. I may end up throwing out the original completely and starting from scratch. just this one passage. not the whole book. it's really bugging me and I am beginning to worry that the amount of effort I'm having to put into this will never be repaid. still, if the book ever gets anywhere, it will have my name on it in one capacity or another.
I keep thinking I must be neglecting something with this staying up all night working at my computer gesture. I might have to make a to-do list just to see what is missing.
that is about all I have to say for now. stay tuned.